Wednesday, March 30, 2011
The Ghost of Black Hill
Chapter 1 "Hay Derk?" "Ya CC?" "I got a call about a Ghost at Black Hill,will you drive me there?" "Sure,anything for you." I just nodded my head this is a typical day as CC,Derk is my partner as you can see he likes me but he is not my type. I took 5 hours to arrive at Black Hill looked like a nice place. I studied the house will Derk just studied me. I screamed through the window I saw a Ghost It had blood shot eyes crazy hair and soaked clothes. When Derk looked through the window he saw nothing. "Derk thi is not a normal case." Chapter 2 the family CC went inside to see the family there was 2 toddlers a frail old lady right when we were about to talk to them a buff man came in and sat next to the lady. so thats chapter 1 and some of 2 tell me what you think
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more mystery. I like that Derk couldn't see what CC had seen and I like that the family seems all out of place. what is a buff man doing with a frail old lady? is he her grandson or a caretaker? and how do these babies fit in? mysterious........
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